请修改一篇初一英语短文,有错误请在原文改出,一定要仔细!再麻烦大家写一篇一样的短文!
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Yao Ming is great basketball star------在is后加a

He play basketball is very well----------He playS basketball very well 这句话谓语动词有两个,一个是is一个是play,显然错了,记住单三后动词加s

At six thirty he run with his friends-----he runS---记住单三后动词加s

After run------------------------------------After running,AFTER后用动名词

Then he listen to music at eight thirty---he listens to music

Nine o'clock,he play basketball--------At nine o'clock,he playS basketball

At twelve o'clock eats lunch------------At twelve o'clock he eats lunch

We very like Yao Ming!-----------------We like Yao Ming very much!

错误太多,句式也比较单一,六点半之类的时间表达可采用half past of ,to ,past 等

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