高人救命啊! 请改我的英文文章Respect leader: I am Zhi Wei Li. I was a work
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第一句用i am a worker,后面是I went to work there about half one year ago.把each day改为every day.i am very enthusiastic on working .Because改为as.limited用limit.

a lot of troubles

i have something wanting to reflect to you.

since去掉,on XXXday,XXyear.

After the sick day

second,which i want to refect is ----

when she hasn't worn gloves,then去掉.always touch the food,on去掉

that are served to the children

When I saw she do this

the same time I would said

That was not health改为it isn't healthy.

many food,food不可数,这里要用引号.

I don't know,either.

on October,22,2007

Thank you so much for reading the letter,

给我额外加分好不拉