暑假英语日记This holiday is my best busy holiday for I am learning
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老大,你的时态要统一啊,不能这会是现在时,下一句又成了过去时。这怎么行啊,要不就全部是过去时,要不就全部用现在时态。你这么换来换去是的不得到什么好的评价的。即使老师不仔细翻看你的日记,但由于你的错误有些实在是太明显了

This holiday was my most busy holiday i never had. Because I had to learn English, comp...