帮我看看这篇文章啊,有错误请指教啊,
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说了半天,没说你是哪国哪省的啊

My school is so big.换成It's a very big school.

2800 students in the school换成2800 students in it

还有个逻辑错误,操场有什么可爱的,又有什么可exciting的?要说就说爱运动就完了.

like football中的like去掉

My school likes a big gardon换成My school is like a big garden

You can see many plants everywhere换成There are plants everywhere

different with换成different from