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took it to our home-> took it home(home作为副词使用,简洁)

feather ->feathers(可数的)

bill->tail(尾巴)

But anyone didn’t know what kind of bird is it.(词句语法错误较多)

But no one knew what kind of bird it is.

today’s morning ->this morning(今天早晨的表达方法)

My parents and me all were frighten

->My parents and i were all frightened.

look for ->have a look at

it was the bird cry->it was the bird who cried

I was very exciting->I was very excited.

I gave it a name that is ->I named it as...