请大家帮我改错Dear JimmyI have not receive your message for a long
5个回答

eceive改成received

lift改成life

me改成my

studied改成study

I take a self-study examination改成I'm going to take the self-study examination

it will get college diploma改成it will get me a college diploma

The time is passing改成Time and tide wait for no one.

we must accept it前面加but

(基本上还写得不错;有些地方应该是粗心所致,例如life写成lift,并非你本身的水平问题)