1.ran改为run
2.get改为to get
3.get改为get to
4.jump not改为为can't jump
5.how改为what
6.Jim改为Jim's
7.talking改为talking to
8.去掉the
9.can also才对
10.tell改为telling
11.and改为with
12.cold改为colder
13.need改为need to
14.made改为making
15.are改为is
16.many改为more
17.likes改为like
18.all 改为both
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