With the coming of Christmas holiday,I have a two week holid
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I have a two-week holiday.而且HOLIDAY与前文重复.或者可以写成vacation.如果你不是专业英语,要求很高的话,holiday与vacation可以通用
decided--decide还没到来所以现在时
stay at home and memorize words---我感觉应该改成I decide to stay at home to memorize words.
all the day-------all day
I will go to church----I will go to the church名词前面要有冠词.
celebrate the Christmas day---- Christmas 这个节日不能有DAY.
圣诞快乐Merry Christmas 而不是Merry Christmas Day
with people in church 重复 多此一举
It will have a lot of fun太平淡.可以转换句式为I think it will be fantastic
我感觉全文可以改成：
With the coming of Christmas,I have a two-week holiday.I really expect to it.I decide to stay at home to memorize words.But I won't stay at home all day.Because I will go to the church and celebrate the Christmas with the people.I think it will be fantastic.
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