文章有木有语法错误?When I remember that story,I was so happy.This sum
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好像有不少,文章也不大通顺.

I was so happy,是过去式,所以前面也应该过去式,when i remembered that story;

I went to visit the .,后面总共跟了三个地方,是复数,所以应该是用which were;

"what is my bowl?",应该为“where is my bowl”,意思是我的碗哪里去了;

I looked he,he 应该用him,前面应该再加个 at;

另外 fell down 这个词应该不大对,改成removed 更贴切一些,

did't,我认为应该用hadn't.

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