这2句句子哪有错?Having walked only a few yards,the mist swallowed h
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Having walked only a few yards,the mist swallowed him up.So,feeling（feeling换成 when he is feeling） his way along the fence,a twig lashed his face.Then he heard heavy footsteps moving（moving 有点不妥,换成following） behind him.He stopped and they stopped.Hurrying(hurrying 换成 When he hurried) forward,they pursued.He found himself in a suffocating world with a feeling of helplessness and blindness.He turned back suddenly,and burst into laughers(laughers 换成 laugh) ---- there were （这里加一个just,可以让句子意思更顺）several hares!
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