第一行two artists is 改two artists are(复数)
第二行But the other one artist改成 But the other one(代词替换主语)
第三行come a two beggars改成come two beggars(单复数不能并列用)
one beggar say改成one beggar says(单三形式)
look those ancient改成Look!those ancient(不是一句话,要加标点的)
第四行have a two conservator go across say改成A conservator says going across.(错误太多,
I want we...改成I think we...(译为"我认为")