不排除有因楼主打错字而多做的修正!
1.watched on TV → watched TV
2.went on trip → went on a trip
3.many place of interest → many places of interest
4.In the first morning → On the first morning
5.This was → It was
6.was turning red → were turning red
7.gradually disappeared → gradually appeared
8.rose slow → rose slowly
9.jump above the sea → jumped above the sea
10.How an unforgettable picture → What an unforgettable picture