那位英语高手 ,帮我改一下自己写的六级作文
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The way to success

There 【are改为is】 a famous remark ” Give

me six hours to chop down a tree ,and I will spend the first four sharpening

the axe” .It is very【去掉】 of 【加上great】importance for

us to get preparation ,though

sometimes it will take much time.If the preparation is not enough,we may spend double time 【to do改为doing】 the same work 【which改为as】the other 【one改为people】 do.

Obviously,it’s a key 【of 改为to】success.Getting preparation is a smart way .Admittedly,

【One thing can be finished改为whether one thing can be finished】 is based on hard working .But when there is a way 【加上which/that】can

make working more efficient ,we should 【adopted改为adopt】 it.Just working hard 【is改为does】 not always result in success.【Success改为A successful】 person always 【try改为tries】 different

ways to finish the work.It’s the key 【of改为to】 success.