供参考
(1) occuring --> occurRing
(2) propely --> propeRly
(3) one ---> he*
(4) same situation --> the same situation
* 较少人会用 they 来作为 one 的代词
因为 they 作为‘单数’的用法并非主流的共识
所以用 he 会安全一些
这个技术上的问题
也可以删去主语来解决
即﹕...when encountering the same situation next time.
补充
which happened before 可以省略
...some mistakes from occurring again...会简洁一些