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I was the Art Istitute of Visual Communication Design 3 class Ann.

你以前是那的学生?I am a student of the Art Istitute of Visual Communication Design class 3, Ann.

I'm from HongHe of Yunnan province.

是云南吧.

I like playing volleyball and play computer games.

后面也是喜欢吧,也要ing啊.I like playing volleyball and playing computer games.

we are in place is new campus

where we are in the place is new campus.

all the buildings are national style.

all the buildings are in the national style.

many students are like here,

神马.many students like here

I hope we can become better friends

比较什么==I hope we can become good friends