帮我评价下我写的英语作文准备考博用的,批评指正,评价地详细的再加10到20分不等.Open Mind Open mind
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line 2 "case"--cases
"difficult to slove"-- is difficult to solve
line 5 "visible"--clear
line 7 "infomation age" --age of computer technology
line 8"times"- time
line 10 "When our mind keeps open"--when we keep our minds open
" When our mind keeps open,the traditonal ideals,behaviours as well as rules are likely to be questioned for their reasonableness and therefore we can dispose of those that restrain our development,and furthermore,explore more unknown fields and make more innovations."--problem in sentence structure
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