帮我看看语法正确么now my live i don't like but i want try and go on我主
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这个不对.主语I放在前面,I don't like my live now.( now也可以放在句首大写)

下一句的短语是try one's best to do sth. 尽某人最大的努力

improve意为改进,提高

可以做成:(1)but I will try my best to do it.但是我会尽我最大的努力去做它

(2)but I will try my best to improve it.但我会尽我自己最大的努力去改进它

注:to后面加动词原形.