具体修改如下:
Dear Eva:
I'm Stella--the new receptionist of the Admin Department.Because I don't have the company's Email,so I use my own Email to contact you. I want to ask if I should call you immediately when the candidates are coming? I'm not sure about the order.If not,please give me any suggestions.
Sorry to disturb you.Pls help me to further improve my future work,Thank you very much.
Best Regards,
Stella Zhong
商业信函不要突出自己的弱点,否则会被对方利用.