帮我修改英语文章January 10,2008Dear Mom,I would like to talk about I
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!,movie不能和play一起用,应用see或去掉它.

2,my friend是第三人称单数,应用takes.

3,is very good前少了主语,应加上it

4,I'm so want have that I Pod改为I want to have that I Pod very much.

5,The I Pod can play all Earth's music改为I Pod can play the musics which are all around the world.6,I can switch song,movie,and game .改为I can switch songs,movies,and games .

语法错误太多了,又写了这么多字,我实在说不完了,请找个英语老师帮你辅导一下吧.(几乎全文没一句是对的)

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