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For the excessive study load,some students in our school have got depressed,some have even got serious mental problems.So to help those heavy-burdened students,school authority has decided to organize a series of activities for students.

Experts will give lectures to the students twice a week to help them get out of their mental problems and provide them with proper suggestions.

And a discussion will be held every Friday afternoon,during which students have a chance to exchange their ideas and learn from each other.

In order to create a happy and relaxed studying atmosphere,students can go for an outing or have parties on weekends twice each semester.This way,they can learn in a happy mood.

From my point of view,these activities are quite good to relax the students' mind.All I want to do is to give my sincere thanks to the organizers of the activities.Without their hard work,we are learning in depression and low efficiency.

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