5.6分 此文章比较中规中矩,模板痕迹不重,高分词汇短语不多
dangerouses->dangerousness,
also will->will also,yoth->youth
choise->choice
there be的单复数根据后面的名词决定 这点在文章中多次用错
worth这个词的用法要搞清才可以用 文章中多次用错
first,the disadvantages.这句话过于口语化 写作需要完整的句子
too many examples are there应改成there are too many examples 这个新东方老师特意强调过
举对成人的缺点时应用现在时而不用过去时
建议：你已掌握基本的写作技巧,但基础薄弱,最好巩固一下单词和语法
附：worth,worthy,worthwhile 区别
1.worth adj&n.值得,应该,作形容词在句中只能作表语
①sb./sth.be worth ...:
His words are worth notice.他的话值得注意.
The bike is worth 200 yuan.
②be (well) worth doing (很)值得做...,注意这个句型是主动表被动的用法,如这本书值得一读
This book is worth reading.
2.worthy adj&n.有价值的,值得...的,做形容词时既可以做表语又可以作定语
①be worthy of +n.
He is worthy of our praise.
②be (quite)worthy of being done (很)值得做...:
The film is worhty of being watched.
③be worthy to be done (很)值得做...,上面的句子可以改写为:
The film is worthy to be watched.
3.worthwhile adj.值得做的..值得出力的,既可以做表语又可以作定语
be worthwhile doing/be worthwhile to do:
It is worthwhile discussing the question again.=It is worthwhile to discuss the question again.
