这篇短文有语法错误或者其它错误吗?求高手解答.一个给10分.
3个回答

1、时态不是最好

叙述故事童话、小说用一般现在时

2、took one bite ▶takes a bite

3、And she and the prince got married the very next day.一句好像“各自结婚了”,表述为两者结婚一般这样

▶ And she marries her Prince Charming the very next day.

4、She dressed up like an old beggar woman 词序

▶ She dresses up like an old woman beggar.

5、在''their prayers were answered when a handsome prince cane ''中

可能是你打错了 cane作came

其他都还不错,不过可以再雕琢一下偶!